Wow--that's quite an image, but I always like to read things that put everyday occurences into new light. I never thought to make that analogy before, but I do like it.
It is sort of a gruesome analogy, but I still like it. Never thought of it that way before.
I love how she pulls back from the gruesomeness and seems for a moment like she will be kinder, in the fourth stanza... and then wham! she hits him again with "it is not accidental" :)
I like this quite a lot! It makes me wish I had an ex-boyfriend, just so I could send this to him. Very vivid imagery. And...just plain creepy.
i love the conviction and anger you can feel when you read this poem. especially in the last stanzer
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